Good work Potts
You obviously spent alot of time on this. I liked it, thought it was very sad. Sync was well one. I especially liked the medical equipment scene.
Character design could use a little work, they were kind of sketchy. The blood could of been animated better. If you plan to use the same symbol for a little drop, and then use it for a large drop, make sure you draw it large first. Always work in high resolution if you plan to enlarge it.
Don't let these teenagers get you down, but you're kind of asking for immature hate comments when you post something on Newgrounds.
That was classic!
The first short a classic, wait till you see the 2nd one (better script).
Fresh use of looping
Great graphics Commie and the loop transition is so perfect, you're fooling alot of the dimwits on newgrounds (which is 99.9% of its population). Hehe, keep making toons man, you're really good!
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